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Here's a way of taking the stress out of writing the Valentines verse for your loved one's Valentines card....here's the link.

http://freespace.virgin.net/tim.wintle/valsite/makepoem.htm

This is the first attempt at my poem ......it might need a little work..



To crabbie , my dearest love

I remember our trip to the chippie ,

Your red eyes glinting in the fading light,

The light shining off your eyes

As we played whoopie next to the recycle bins .

I felt happiness for the 20th time in my life

that night; as we lay down by the carnation plants


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crystal_rose
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(@crystal_rose)
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ok here is one from me to my inner child who i forget to love.

for the child within me, i do love.
for the child within me, i do nourish.
for the child within me, i do promise, to let you be that child.

ok see what you meani i thought you just meant write your own,

another dohhh moment

To dave , my dearest love

I remember our trip to the sea ,
Your red eyes glinting in the moon light,
The light shining off your eyes
As we played radio next to the castles .

I felt love for the first time in my life
that night; as we lay down by the rose plant.


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(@sunbeam)
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To Jubi , my dearest love

I remember our trip to the Uganda ,
Your Blue eyes glinting in the Twinkly light,
The light shining off your eyes
As we played Golf next to the huts .

I felt love for the first time in my life
that night; as we lay down by the Gerbera plant.

!!!!!!!!!!!!


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(@crabapple)
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To Oakie , my dearest love

I remember our trip to the beach ,

Your purple eyes glinting in the starry light,

The light shining off your eyes

As we played wii golf next to the tent .

I felt love for the last time in my life

that night; as we lay down by the clover plant.


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(@sunbeam)
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We'd better hope our true loves don't know each other as they may guess these aren't original!! 😀


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